Saturday, July 4, 2009

Unspoken Comments

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some hopes
some heart breaks
some truth, some
unspoken lies
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ritty patnaik
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Raj Nandy 18 July 2009

A beautiful poem with embedded spiritual and philosophical thoughts.10! -Raj Nandy

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 04 July 2009

yes...some soft emotions, gently expressed, ...flows smoothly-this poem. thank you.

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Ejaz Khan 04 July 2009

A nice write, good flow and touching theme.

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rago rago 04 July 2009

sweet and written in gentle way............ very nice.........

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premji premji 04 July 2009

too mitti hai.... pour out, give wings to aflictions....... i like to call them: poetry.......

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