Saturday, October 25, 2008

Unsettled Weather. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Louring heavy skies
Threaten rain.
We must hurry home
Yet again.
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Fay Slimm
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Holly 12 June 2020

great poem I really liked it

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David Threadgold 25 October 2008

Nature as always is so unpredictable Fay and you describe a part of it so well.10/10 Regards Dave T

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Tom Balch 25 October 2008

A fantastic and true to life piece, love it 10++++++++++++++ regards Tom

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Lynda Robson 25 October 2008

Lovely atmospheric write Fay, typical British weather lol,10 Lynda xx

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 25 October 2008

Sounds like british summer time by the sea, all those sweet memories of being rained on it's spain for me.. Andrew 10

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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