Wednesday, August 31, 2016

Unsettled Comments

Rating: 4.8

That dreadful feeling of turmoil
seeps through my arteries;
I scream to cry but don't make a sound.
The pain is deep, and its source is a mystery.
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Khairul Ahsan 24 September 2020

A poem that reflects on the dichotomy between the good and the evil, between remaining calm and restive, being in darkness and light. The title couldn't be more appropriate!

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Mahtab Bangalee 20 November 2019

first to the last line very expressive writing at the ending - yeah the place of heart discover the seat among human! /// great writings

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Prabir Gayen 20 December 2018

Thoughtful poem with nice diction... Beautifully penned.. Thanks. Dear poet.. Awesome poem

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Chinedu Dike 06 February 2018

A poignant piece of poetry set aside for sober reflection. Thanks for sharing Lily.

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Jazib Kamalvi 18 January 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Lily. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Kelly Kurt 31 August 2016

A deep and insightful piece, Lily. Thanks

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Partha Pratim Goswami 31 August 2016

Very very striking words- Sentences touches the hidden pain of heart and compels me to think of my hurts. -a great work.Carry on, thank you for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 31 August 2016

The pain is deep! ! However, hope lies ahead of you. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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