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Well organised ideas, this is a good poem.

beautifully written! !

this is an amazing poem i can tell that there is a lot of motion in this

I understand why you used the title now, you shouldn't have sent it, it's terrible. However, cheers, Jerry

sweey lil poem. short candid and sweet-you are true poetess

Poignant, but still with a sweet ending. I really like the last stanza. Thanks for sharing.

Beautiful sounds like ur broken but still in love

it would a great year for you. Read my piece called, bye bye, you wretch (farewell to 2008) ciao mi amiga Leslie

Even though you say that there is no love in him, you still have best wishes for him. That is what true love really is. Thank you for sharing. A 10+. Love & hugs, Barbara