Thursday, September 11, 2008

Unseen Wemen Comments

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Men what have we done?
Working every day away with no time to play
Feeling tired and wore out at the end
Our minds too frustraded to desend
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Tia Maria 20 January 2009

Wise words in hard times. Some men still at least go home only to their wives & some wives treasure that, but... romance is so rare & that's so sad

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Little Hatila ;) 29 December 2008

'Men what have we done? ' well, i would like to answer that but i am not man! ! ! very well done....10 Hataw

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*Trusting You* 15 December 2008

Fantastically written my dear friend. good men like you and so many others are really to hard on your selfs. I really enjoyed reaing this... very well done. good job. Becca

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DELETED NOW 17 September 2008

do u mean unseen women? and u have a lot of corrections to be made. ha ha ha...I got ink on my hands. I writing a new poem...the title is 'autumn love', you should get ur eyes on it as soon as u find out it's posted. ha ha ha...sorry I can not stop laughing at what ur poem made me think of...

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Serenity Prayer 11 September 2008

very interesting POV (point of view) . great job.

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Tyease Collins 11 September 2008

Ahh interesting...i wonder who the inspiration was for this poem ^_^ anyways i love it. You are such a good author ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ -Tess

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pied piper 11 September 2008

I love this it is so true.. I think you are truly talented...... Be well.

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Pied Piper Berry 11 September 2008

I love this... The sentiment is awsome. Well done! ! !

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