Tuesday, November 14, 2017

Unseen Nemisis Comments

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Caught in a maelstrom of emotion
reducedto unbridled, phobic obsession.
That first moment of recognition clouding any notion
of a sorcery induced to possession.
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Lodigiana Poetess
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Akhtar Jawad 27 November 2017

Obsession is aftereffect of love, we are helpless in love so how we can get rid of obsession. If Nemesis balances it from betrayal, we have no alternate but to accept it as our fate. Let love make us a slave, a beloved is our need.

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Lodigiana Poetess 27 November 2017

Love is such a wonderful yet complex state of being! thank you for your lovely words Akhtar! x

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 November 2017

This is a beautiful poem on love and life having touching expression and nice diction. Dear Lodigiana, you are right to say that obsession can lead to betrayal and love makes slaves of us all. Thanks for sharing.10

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Lodigiana Poetess 26 November 2017

Thank you so much for your kind words x

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