Thursday, September 11, 2008

Unseen Love. Comments

Rating: 3.0

Life spins with a dynamic throb,
Assailing our senses, vibrates from above
And below, be-speaking great care
Used in land, sea and air,
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Fay Slimm
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Tom Balch 13 September 2008

this is a very well worked piece with great meaning,10 for you Fay, Tom

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Bob Blackwell 11 September 2008

What you write is true, love is beauty, beauty love, truth is beauty, beauty true love and love true beauty. 10/10 well done Fay. L Bob

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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