Unseen Journey Comments

A marvelous perception of life and death painted on the canvas of a beautiful poem. I totally agree with this write specially the lines, to wit: Only God is truth and we trust light. Without light, we cannot have journey. Beautiful lines from a masterly crafted poem.10

This is a brilliant work, Kumarmani. Your portrait of death can be taken literally and metaphorically. When we stand still we may believe that we are in control of destiny, that nothing moves until we opt to engage with our environments. The reality is that a silent, covert journey continues. We are merely passengers.

Having unknown and unseen journey, We proceed, not as per our will, No one likes pain of birth and death, Karma binds and nature decides these.....so nice..10

Yes! Death doesn't discriminate! And we don't have hands on things whatever happens. Karma adjoins with natural forces to decide the fate. The poet is a scholar and very rich in his thoughts. A well written poem. I enjoyed. ++++10.

Another fantastic poem by mr.Mahakul.Thank you!

Fabulous poem! Great to read it!

Life is a journey to death, karma binds and nature decides. Our own actions will light the path. And all earthly things are left behind when we leave. A poem overwhelming with the profound. Thank you my friend.

Beautiful, this poem can be related with many things and people, wonderful and beautiful...i really enjoyed it dear Sir

No one likes pain of birth and death, Karma binds and nature decides these.... Food for thought, about our purpose in life. Thanks for sharing the philosophical poem.

Where have we to go? Own action tells, Lonely path opens wings to hold us, Only God is truth and we trust light, Without light we cannot have journey. Loving this Stunning poem Kumarmani 10+

Death makes all equal that is seen, Having no interest to leave but Soul leaves body and wealth gained, Helpless soul wanders alone in path. Augustine of Hippo's teaching includes that some have been condemned to death, others have been predestined to life. It is about the fate of the individual soul and the fight for existence.Wonderful poem, voted 10.

We are seeing birth and death, Staying inside family and society, Still each one of us is alone, This is wonderful earth rarely.

Although we enjoy these in life, / Time pulls thread and we leave.~~~~ what a beautifully written truth! I swear I shall not easily forget Time pulling a thread and we leave, , , just absolutely stunning and the rest of the poem strong in giving us much to ponder. 10+++++++++++++=

liked this poem very very much......... yes. where are we going...... our aim of life. wishes, fulfillment.. seeking truth.. death, life.. i read this poem with mixed emotions.. thank u dear Kumaramani.. tony

The circle of life completed by death but our destination is unknown out purpose unwritten Great write

Your concluding lines are so true: No one likes pain of birth and death, Karma binds and nature decides these Yes, Nature decides, humans are only recepients. Birth and Death have only Life inbetween.....These three belong together. God and karma are inseparable. I have enjoyed your magnificent poem, A 10 and more Vote

Missing someone is beloved/We are missing every moment/Matters and illusion here/These have captured us tightly.....I admire the reality, the truth, the beauty of expression! A fabulous piece of work! Thanks dear sir for sharing!

Where we have to go! ! Far beyond; into another realm. Life and death! ! ! Time pulls thread and we leave. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.