Unseen Force Seen Works (Octave) Comments

Unseen Force Seen great expose of wisdom, thanks

Unseen Force Seen Works it is great written poem,10

Unseen Force Seen Works is wonderful great poem

Unseen Force Seen Works is as interesting as full in wisdom, again congrat,

Unseen Force Seen Works one of the great octave poem in the world, thank you and congratulations on being day; s poem

Unseen Force Seen Works a great poem of air force in the body of living beings

Yes. Unseen elements are at perpetual work giving us life and a sense of consciousness. What remains in the end beyond Time and Space? Fields and forces. Awareness, consciousness etc are different manifestations of these entities. Matter is also a manifestation of these fields and forces. Fields can be experienced but cannot be seen.

The unseen process of respiration, both at the macro level of mechanical movement of air, and at the micro level of cellular respiration is truly a miraculous process. Thank you for poetically reminding us of this vital and fundamental aspect of existence so commonly taken for granted. Congratulations!

Supplying oxygen and removing poisons Are among those life saving necessaries Without causing problems but leaving thoughts That catch the brain, swell heart and veins as interesting as full of wisdom, thank you and congratulations

Unseen Force Seen Works is on an excellent idea, congratulations

Indeed, we are engaged with the invisible in reflective moments, and the faculty of knowing is invisible.

Unseen Force Seen Works, a great poem, air is made life saving force, living beings cannot do without it, it is unseen but works seen, great imagery and idea, thank you and congratulations on this great poem

I find this poem very thought provoking: you write from a very wise place. Well done for being chosen as poet of the day.

A well written poem Reza. Congratulations for being poet of the day..

Unseen Force Seen Works a great poem as the name, so the poem, highly meaningful, scientific great poem on the impacts of air in living beings, thank you dear great poet and congratulations on the poem being day's poem.

For a good health pure air is vital. In the present time due to massive industrialization and felling of trees we have been breathing polluted air resulting in catching many diseases. Nice poem and congrats.

A nice poem for the poem of the day....Congrats again.

A great write. You have succeeded using scientific allusion to acknowledge human physiology and the creator

Congratulations on this great poem, Dear poet, you have brought a great change in literature, You have brought scientific theories in literature, thanks for creating a new era in literature

our life force is dependent on what we breathe, scientists take note?