Unseen Angel Comments

Thanks Bri for dropping by and reading it. I don't think about the details while composing a poem like alliterations or rhyme scheme. I just go with the flow and then don't edit it much. And its true. This poem was composed for my muse, my girlfriend whom I met through this very website. And I decided not to submit any more poems. And as mentioned in the first line, she is my life, too good to be described. I would be honored if this poem remains on your list for even a second...

saket, i really enjoyed this. i like that you used rhymes but did not feel you had to use them all the time. i almost always use rhymes and i came close in the last sentence, without trying. luckily for others i don't speak in rhymes. i liked your uncertainty about her appearance. i do wonder if there is any truth in this story. i mean: do you really have an unseen angel? thanks for sharing. my mypoemlist is getting rather long, and this one shall be the one on the top of the list for a little while at least.