Wednesday, August 2, 2006

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She gazed up at the sky,
with her lifeless eyes.
But that cradle of stars,
just did not glance back at her
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Sylvia Thomas
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Perfection Is Flawed 04 August 2006

This was a most beautiful poem. It shows how vulnerable we humans are when we love someone, who just doesn't seem to love us back. Lovely poem. I exceptionally like the last two lines.

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Sylvia Thomas

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