Saturday, September 16, 2006

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It feels like pain, it might be love,
punching the heart with holes
to breathe but too small to satisfy.
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Melanie Emikohe
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Vincent Levine 23 July 2018

Wow! Great poem. Is it pain or is it love? There is a fine line, but it has to be drawn... to get ecstatic, wild, intoxicated. That is the goal-

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Melanie Emiko 23 July 2018

True. Thank you.

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Prasanna Kumari 16 September 2006

i feel the agony and ecstasy of pain in your poem

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