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At the long distance
And far high above

And below
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Abdul Wahab
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 20 June 2013

emotion like tide on which you ride is not a simple thing I would say or in poem I wrote I will oceans in my tear drop the DEW

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Tribhawan Kaul 20 June 2013

Among the multitudes a true orphan....reading this poem gives me an impression that the poet want the readers to know that the human kind has left the ecological balances on its own like an orphan and thereby facing heavy rains, floods, cyclones taking heavy toll of human beings. Recent floods in Kedarnath/uttarkashi in India is one such proof treating mother nature as an orphan. Lovely write.

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Fatima Nusairat 19 June 2013

Of reliefs In the form of tears...I love it..dear Abdul Wahab

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Farah Ilyas 19 June 2013

Heart overflows more widely than any oceans & seas...brilliant poem, full of emotions & deserve to devotion...

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Farah Ilyas 19 June 2013

Heart overflows more widely than any oceans & seas...brilliant poem, full of emotions & deserve to devotion...

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Heather Wilkins 19 June 2013

when the heart overflows it can flood the ocean with tears. lovely write

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 19 June 2013

Floating in the ocean Of pain ... Relief in the form of tears. Nice expressions in a wordless world. Thank you for the deep feelings.

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