Saturday, March 22, 2008

Unsaid Comments

Rating: 5.0

Between you and me,
A lot is left Unsaid.

Some feelings in the heart,
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Priyanka Shetty
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Preeti - is here! 22 March 2008

Simple words, but a lot of thought went in there! ! superb!

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shel cope 22 March 2008

Like the way you've used rhyme, that unexpected double hit in the last couplet. You nail a very sad fact of life too! ! ~s~

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