Unsafe Relationships Comments

This peculiar topic needs deep thinking. Many congratulations! !

You actually left me awestruck.5-star for this.

Very nice poem! I enjoyed it!

Great poem, the last stanza say's it all, it has a wisdom all of its own.

Great poem, James, but Bri is correct. You should remove the apostrophe in the title.

Were the lovers married to others and secretly seeking solace? bri : ) I liked the early alliteration and the rhyming, though some rhyming may have been forced.

James, I gave five stars, but, though you STRONGLY hinted at it, I believe you did NOT give me specific reasons why affair was not 'safe'.

James, Despite your Recent Rise to the Ranks of Renowned poets, I think you may want to review your use of an apostrophe in your title. Maybe? bri

(cont.) BUT AN 'unsafe relationship' may be 'better than no relationship' OR IT MAY SEEM SO. bri ;)

The last line is a clincher. 'clincher definition: 1. something that helps someone make a decision' AND 'A clincher sentence is a concluding sentence reinforcing your key message.' (cont.)