Unrevealing Comments

Cry without tears, But no heart to feel, Express without senses, No emotions to reveal. Walk without footsteps, No legs to take stride, A mind to think clearly, Sooo much to hide....... very revealing poem. one has to read your poems many times to understand the real sense. tony

A nice poem with an appropriate caption. The last stanza is truly captivating.

Unrevealing, yet so much revealed in the last stanza. Most intelligently created these feelings of depression and released our deepest inside finally, at last the world would know. Spiritual journey that sets our soul free. Amazingly worded. I so admire thy words. A 10 and more vote, Most precious utterance, Sarah.

An excellent use of contrasts to express the essence of your being. Sarah, you have bravely bared your soul and been rewarded with a most profound poem. Thank you for your brutal honesty and courage. Keep up the great writes and soon you may have another Poem Of The Day.

So much to say! In this world. Thanks for sharing.

Hi Fantastic poetry. Young with an old mind Strong with a frail mind is that how you describe yourselves? great words contrasting one another, bringing out the true mood of the poem. Very good.

another fine piece. the last two lines are particularly beautiful and the idea of contrasts and restraint very well expressed. another 10 for the Shropshire Lass! Tom Billsborough

I can relate to this poem very much. Thank you for sharing!

Take a pause, reassess, slowly exhale. All of the senses are contrary here. Open feelings with nothing exposed. The other side of experience where the subtle and simple are wonderful. Here you walk without footsteps, cry without tears. Waiting to exhale.

using of contrasts as a literary means....... you have successfully applied here in this great poem crying without tears, walking without footsteps.... thank you very much for this great poem. tony