She seductively sat
Upon my lap like a child,
Like a kindergartner
With proud innocent curls
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well this was stunning Uriah.. gentle words but overflowing with passion.. breath taking! HBH
Uriah, A poem of such presence and passion! It reminds me of my well-spent and mis-spent youth. Thank you for this. A fine write. Hugh
I think every guy I know could use some of your passion and presence. An absolutely delightful piece that speaks with such breadth and sparks the imagination to run wild.
Aah, why can't men talk like this in real life in everyday conversation? lol They'd have so many women after them that they wouldn't know what to do with them all! Simply divine, Uriah. Shannon xoxo
Oooohhhh! ! ! ! Uriah you on a winning streak here. Keep up the good work. Love Ernestine XXX
sounds like all the times I've spent with my lover...excellent writing my friend.
Sounds like a very romantic and passionate moment! You create the mood very well, without the use of outright vulgarities..........that's a talent. Sincerely, mary
A sweet and romantic write Uriah. Tingling.