Saturday, February 5, 2005
Unrequited Comments
Rating: ★4.6
If tomorrow was a feeling
And love- a sight to see,
I'd feel eternity's embrace
Every time you looked at me.
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Shelley B. Keats
06 February 2005
I think this is the best poem I've read on this site all week- very cleverly conceived as well. Metrically, the poem might flow even better if 'each' replaced 'every' in the fourth line-but of course, it's great regardless!
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8/16/2025 6:11:11 AM # 1.0.0
A very creative poem, an excellent read.--Melvina--