Tuesday, January 13, 2009

Unrequited Love Comments

Rating: 4.5

(This is dedicated to my best friend, whom I love without reason or rhyme.)

For when you are scared, or don't know what to do,
Do not be afraid, I've coded my DNA right into you,
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Deona Skidmore
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John Smith 17 January 2009

This is an absolutely stunning peice of work. Easily deserving of a ten. I look foward to reading more of your work.

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Aryabod Siharyvani 15 January 2009

in this poem you really take a pice of me great work i love it keep in the good work

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Keith Hendrickson 13 January 2009

you have talent for sure. keep writing.

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Scott Austin 13 January 2009

Excellent piece of work…thank you for sharing it with us...enjoyed your work…keep on writing. Scott

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Deona Skidmore

Deona Skidmore

Fort Benning Georgia
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