Thursday, April 13, 2006

Unrequited Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Apron undone
Weeping begun
Once keeping a heart was sincere
Hands clasp a face
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Christine K. Trease
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Brian Dorn 10 May 2006

Christine, you've captured the delicate nature of the human heart. Excellent write! Brian

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Julia Klimenova 13 April 2006

I agree with Graham. A wonderful economy of words, and every one of them hits the target.

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Graham Jones 13 April 2006

An excellent piece of writing, short sharp and to the point, an enjoyable read.

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Christine K. Trease

Christine K. Trease

Price, Utah
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