Tuesday, May 13, 2008

Unrequited Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

My heart physically aches
My body, it quakes

Awful loss that I feel
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Rose Falcone
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Rani Turton 14 May 2008

The couplets are racily rhymed but very readable indeed. Thanks.

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Bernard Tommy Vue 13 May 2008

Yup that is just life. I like it.

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Rose Falcone

Rose Falcone

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