You had me where you wanted me
I was a slave to your sultry charms
I always dreamed of holding you
So close within my warm, willing arms.
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This is a fresh and imaginative verse - - has a free flow and the transition from stanza to stanza is well thought out. The title too sums up the chosen theme - well written.
What a lovely poem this is! ! ! John, you wrote in a nice way... Sorry for being so long - I was sick...