Unremebering Dream Comments

i really liked it, I gave it a 10!

You pen a deep and dark picture here. This landscape is inhabitable and yet your imagination is alluring. I do not understand this poem, it is mysterious and dark. A nice read all the same 10/10

let the things happen in its own way........ when he come he annoyed....... and the poem give hatred and annoyance........ well write..always smile smile smile....

'He will come and He will be annoyed' brilliant! !

This one indeed is a very nice poem!