Wednesday, April 11, 2018

Unrehearsed Moments Comments

Rating: 3.5

The young man noticed the older couple walking toward him at a slow and labored pace
The older man clinging to the older woman…his arm around her waist.

They stopped along the water's edge…he gave her an embrace.
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Jim Yerman
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Bipasha D 11 April 2018

A heartfelt poem with a beautiful story.

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Dawn Novus 11 April 2018

An eternity in an hour... That poem was a story complete. What a beautiful visual of love in action. Superb write and thank you so much for sharing.

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