Sunday, September 29, 2019

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Rating: 5.0

There is pain
That is forever,
Full of sorrow and regret
There are memories that never
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Sandra Feldman
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Bernard F. Asuncion 30 September 2019

‘And God shall wipe away all tears from their eyes; and there shall be no more death, neither sorrow, nor crying, neither shall there be any more pain: for the former things are passed away.” [Revelation 21: 4] You have penned a well expressed poem, dear Ma’am Sandra....10++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 September 2019

I hope and pray there will be that day, Sandra that this void in your heart will be filled with happiness. A heart rending write well conveyed.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 September 2019

A very touching and beautiful poem. We can feel the sadness and pain depicted in this poignant write. It touches one's heart. The intensity of pain sometimes measures how we can cope sadness. There is that pain that is so intense that no amount of consolation can fill the void we feel in our heart.

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James Mclain 29 September 2019

No you don't Sandra, some people who have never Loved think that they have. Thank you for this personal reminder of me. James McLain 🎸

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Shaun Cronick 29 September 2019

Excellent. This simply flows and glides over the reader. So heart-breakingly filled with life's sorrowful truths. Superb poem thoroughly enjoyed it's wonderful construction and sad imagery. 10++ and added to my poem treasure chest. Thank you Sandra for writing and sharing this.

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