I look into your eyes
and I fall more inlove
then I have ever been
before.
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Unreal love is the worst kind of love Very true. Anything unreal is the worst of its kind. The poem expresses your pent up frustration and emotion.
Really nice! very expressive and detailed! Keep up the good work! Allison,
sometimes i doubt if a real love can be found in our world.......PLEASE dear everybody do not waste ur selves on the unreal loves...they are everywhere, ...please! thanx! :)
What a beautiful outpouring of deep feelings and emotions about unreal love you prove your so real with such love that sweeps the reader along like the crest of a wave! Great write!
i like this. lots of emotion and feeling here good write.. dino
it really is quite expressive and your emotion comes through clear and strong. Just work on rhythm.
thanks *bleeding heart* * arielle* and thats weird we r so much alike lol and preston i no right.. i with i could just get over him tho its just not that easy i wish it was tho
This is a great poem! It really expresses the powerful emotion that love is. I also like how you express the evil things that love can do to someone, and also the joys of having it present in your life. Thank you for the post!
Hun i love this poem it relates to me so much and ur just an amazing writer i feel stupied for going baack to htis same guy for about 2 years now and i still cant let him go cuz im in love with him
[Unreal love is not love]'Tis an excellent poem(poignant write) ! ! ! !
[Unreal love is not love]'Tis an excellent poem(poignant write) ! ! ! !
I was very angry but sad when I wrote this...: (