Tuesday, December 13, 2011

*unreal Love* Comments

Rating: 3.0

I look into your eyes
and I fall more inlove
then I have ever been
before.
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Dianna R. Evans
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Dianna Renate Evans 26 August 2013

I was very angry but sad when I wrote this...: (

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Khairul Ahsan 25 August 2013

Unreal love is the worst kind of love Very true. Anything unreal is the worst of its kind. The poem expresses your pent up frustration and emotion.

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Dianna Renate Evans 19 August 2013

Thank u very much :)

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Goldheart Bird 19 August 2013

Really nice! very expressive and detailed! Keep up the good work! Allison,

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Dianna Renate Evans 19 August 2013

Just got to stay strong right?

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Alookh (matin) 19 August 2013

sometimes i doubt if a real love can be found in our world.......PLEASE dear everybody do not waste ur selves on the unreal loves...they are everywhere, ...please! thanx! :)

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Dianna Renate Evans 14 December 2012

Thank you guys very much for your comments! :)

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Barbara Nixon 12 December 2012

Great expressive poem, beautifully written. Love it!

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Hazel Durham 12 December 2012

What a beautiful outpouring of deep feelings and emotions about unreal love you prove your so real with such love that sweeps the reader along like the crest of a wave! Great write!

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Dean Evans 23 February 2012

i like this. lots of emotion and feeling here good write.. dino

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Kelsi Brockway 01 February 2012

it really is quite expressive and your emotion comes through clear and strong. Just work on rhythm.

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Dianna Renate Evans 19 December 2011

thanks *bleeding heart* * arielle* and thats weird we r so much alike lol and preston i no right.. i with i could just get over him tho its just not that easy i wish it was tho

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Preston Simmons 18 December 2011

This is a great poem! It really expresses the powerful emotion that love is. I also like how you express the evil things that love can do to someone, and also the joys of having it present in your life. Thank you for the post!

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*BleedingHeart* *Arielle* 16 December 2011

Hun i love this poem it relates to me so much and ur just an amazing writer i feel stupied for going baack to htis same guy for about 2 years now and i still cant let him go cuz im in love with him

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Brianna Winebarger 15 December 2011

THis poem is sweet and honest!

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Sharmaine Walker 14 December 2011

your poem was very nice

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Sharmaine Walker 14 December 2011

your poem was very nice

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Vipins Puthooran 13 December 2011

[Unreal love is not love]'Tis an excellent poem(poignant write) ! ! ! !

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Vipins Puthooran 13 December 2011

[Unreal love is not love]'Tis an excellent poem(poignant write) ! ! ! !

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