Sunday, January 18, 2009

Unraveled Lifespan Comments

Rating: 5.0

Over the seventieth candle
-for the first time-
his attitude to change she did set forth.
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Christos R. Tsiailis
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Linda Ori 25 May 2009

Ah......if only we could go back and do it over. So many things we would do that we didn't do, now that there is no time left to rethink our lives. This is a brilliant flash-back into a happier time of youthfulness and ambition. Aging is so sad, especially when the mind within is still young and able to dream. Deeply introspective piece - well done! Linda :)

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Christos Rodoulla Tsiailis 20 January 2009

Thanks Tiffany. I will read yours, too.

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Rivers' Baby Gurl ;) 19 January 2009

nice poem...loved it... read mine

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Christos R. Tsiailis

Christos R. Tsiailis

Nicosia, Cyprus
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