Unquenched Thirst. Comments

Fraught with longing, the last two lines are really beautiful.

atrophied air needs desire. Tomorrow will bring untreated relief. Rachel An Butler

This is a most beautifully expressive and excellently written poem, Fay, a wonderful comment on the desire generated by deep love. As always, you excell in writing of love and romance and it was a pleasure to read this lovely poem. Carl.