Unpleasant Light Comments

One word.........Wow!

The lines tell us that the pen is new to us the pen's ink flows into contours rarely seen in your thinking spheres I wonder few only adhere you are a legend on the make your thoughts are quite rare and strikingly incompare I find in the lines a new world of vision a new globe of ideas and genuine fusion the nature lover in you outwitted the Engineer in you Or it seems you are a Humane Enginner...............Lovely ideas, lovely lines and very very exciting and amusing invigorating angle of thinking...............very nice.......

we light up the night not because we fear the dark but because we are scared to be alone in darkness...because then we are forced to look inward....a great composition that stimulates thought

I hardly experience pitch darkness, Ranjit, Let me apprehend that you miss the patches of darkness in this world of artificial illumination.If so, then I'll like to add that the patches of darkness amidst the concealed sun is so helpful to make us prepared for the ultimate darkness...the ultimate truth....the Death....Loved your thought process...and for that...10+

nice very sweet profound words -10 anjali

Very well written piece so full of truth and honesty. I enjoyed reading this. Nicely done.

you have developed the theme and content so well. i like the line pseudo illumination- here I feel you are speaking of higher consciousness. a very good piece of writing, Ranjit. Mamta

a lovely poem..the second last marvels an unnatural man..the last speaks the absolute truth

A brilliant, illuminating piece of writing!

So many around us...you've chosen a common one in every street house...second stanza speaks out...and the ending is the superb....thank you

I really liked the way u brought pseudo light in it... :)

great, ranjit.............!

very nice and well crafted words......this pseudo light not only made false glitter and made us false to perceive.............