Thursday, October 24, 2013

Unpleasant Echo - Senryu Comments

Rating: ★5.0

You sounded like flies
in a big bottle half full
searching for exit.
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Ibnu Din Assingkiri
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Yasmin Khan 02 November 2013

Though a minor phenomenon but dealt interestingly(some say it's humming is like music :)

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Unwritten Soul 27 October 2013

Nyeeeeet...................sound of the mosquitoes or flies...annoying sound... I like the idea of this, it maybe a small sound but it disturbing my sweet dream :) Loved it_Soul

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Ibnu Din Assingkiri

Ibnu Din Assingkiri

Singkir Laut, Kedah, Malaysia
Ibnu Din Assingkiri
Ibnu Din Assingkiri
Singkir Laut, Kedah, Malaysia
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