Friday, June 6, 2008

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Rating: 5.0

Last night I had a dream,
I dreamt that I was free.
I flew with birds,
saw what they see.
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David Taylor
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Jurietta Duraan 06 June 2008

I agree with Yoonoos... very good ending and clever.

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Marvin Brato 06 June 2008

I dreamt that I was free.... why can't man see freedom fore real! Nice penned, A 10.

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David Taylor

David Taylor

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