Unobtainable -Haiku Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin
Unobtainable -Haiku
You are like the moon
in the bottom of the well.
Unobtainable.
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p2the moon is never caught on star void nights, when the moon is hidden behind sky cloud veils, the moon is caught by brilliant love light
Meaningful haiku, but why look down into the depths of a well, look right upward into the sky
Insightfully and elegantly penned. I like your use of the powerful analogy to drive home the point.
Profound Haiku, dear great Poetess! Just that slightest touch in this great Materpiece. TOP Marks! ToMyFavourites
Ever so Powerfully painted and ever so heart touching! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++
Beautifully described! .. Reaching out for a heart that has fallen...
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p1 a lover's moon can be caught in deep wells of true hearts, the moon is catch between stone walls, in depths at the bottom of a well, on clear nights stars shinning,
I wrote the poems 'Catching A Lover's Moon In Water Wells', 'Deep Wells Of True Hearts', 'Moon Caught Clear Nights' and 'Moon Hidden Behind Sky Cloud Veils', inspired by the poem 'Unobtainable-Haiku' by the poet Rose Marie Juan-Austin and dedicated to Rose Marie Juan-Austin.