Friday, August 31, 2018

Uno (Card Game) Comments

Rating: 5.0

The naughty boys
were just two infants
when they played this game first time.
Now they have grown in two giant monsters!
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COMMENTS
Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 September 2018

A well crafted thought provoking poem. I agree with the Poet's Notes. Well penned.10++

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Richard Wlodarski 01 September 2018

Akhtar, this is a very sophisticated poem. Extremely well written! And so timely!

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Rini shibu 31 August 2018

A thought provoking poem about the nuclear war which affected many wombs

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Khalida Bano Ali 31 August 2018

A timely warning, listen to him!

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Akhtar Jawad

Akhtar Jawad

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