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Enjoyed your poem. Touching!

Dear Poet, You have really succeeded in unmasking such a wonderful experience in these verses. Good. a delightful read, and to me, it reminded of Sir.Walter Scott's 'Lochinvar', which i used to teach undergraduate students. i could read the whole poem in single stretch and it shows its enticing ambiance. though much of convention not followed, the theme, the beauty of the scene, experience well depicted with due diction. God Bless. keep penning.

Love this beautifully written piece! Tells such a wonderful story. Truly enjoyed reading this poem!