Wednesday, June 15, 2011

Unloyal Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

our love is submitted
once we made a commitment
we share enemies
and we fight off plenty
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 15 June 2011

Incredibly well. Very strong sentiments. Great imagery. Fine poetics. I rated it 10/10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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James Bost

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