Unlover Summer (Part 2) Comments

I'm sitting here shaking my head! This is spellbinding. You truly are a class act Tailor. This is full of stunningly sculpted lines. If I was to pick out the best ones I'd have to copy the whole poem into the box. The ideas, the images, the language, the atmosphere, the allusions, the internal rhymes, the swaying rhythm, and more...all combine to make this exceptionally good. 'Picker in opposition, in zombie pumps Scented beyond reason, howling desire' That's me... just reading this! ! jim

Beautiful words, Tailor. Marvellous.

This is meant to be read again and again...and savored. Very, very nicely done, Tailor. Your imagery here is rich, and your ironies strong. The title is the greatest irony of all. Raynette

Yup, I'm gasping too... what an erudite, atmospheric stunner. t x