Unlover Letters (Part 1) Comments

wowwww lots of talent and imagery on display -10 anjali

A superb evocation of mood. The imagery is astounding. Gasp.

Tailor, there is so much to find between these lines penned with great skill. You share hurt and confusion and show the scene you describe imaginatively and so clearly Your title says it all. Brilliant. Love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxx

I know this feeling. You paint the metaphor so engagingly and provokingly. It is superb. t x

Tailor, you've just had me peering into the abyss here - the abyss of sheer wonder tainted with finality - the ending of all! ! In just one read! This is spellbinding! Outrageously clever imagery and no filler at all! Can R Wilbur really do better than this? I doubt it! I'm at a loss for words again. This has got to be at least as good as Far Ponds. This is a distillation of so much intelligence, imagination, experience and skill.... what can I say!

NoW i hAvE SeEn ThE RiVer Too, LOvE ThE spAcEs CreAtED By ThIs Tailor riffic fLOw, ThanX FoR fLoOdinG ThE senCes, MR BeLL

Keeping up the flow of imagination here Tailor, lots of tallent display Love duncan X

Eloquent display of imagery, Tailor...Nice, tight even-flow...solid elocution Well crafted work, here...''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''F. j. R.