Tuesday, July 7, 2009

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Gilt reflection of your tear shone in the night.
'Don`t go'- said you, embracing me tight.
Knowing it`s not your blame, I whispered to you, -
'All will be gone with the wind, sorry. Don`t be blue'
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Emma Adamyan
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Mahtab Bangalee 03 June 2018

love wanna to catch the unstable heart fairly but its defeated sometime irrationally nice words 10+++

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 April 2016

She waits for me. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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M Asim Nehal 18 February 2016

Superb Poem...Nicely penned, Liked it, Thanks for sharing.

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moribund love 21 October 2009

very beautifully expressed with deep feelings.10+

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rago rago 19 October 2009

pain giving beautiful poem............................

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Maya Hershey 29 September 2009

Very Sad, Parting is so hard... however beautiful poem full of despair expressed in a brilliant way with great diction... nicely done..10+

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Broken Heart 25 September 2009

great poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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I`ve forgotten about you forever, but sometimes, The letters of yellow leaves fly to me. Very piquing I must say…. I wish you wrote more Fondly,

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Alex Andreev 14 July 2009

men ukyrdym bu jonim bilan. bu juda yakshi, janym, juda soz!

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Sarwar Chowdhury 11 July 2009

beautifully penned the facts! Touchy! ....10+

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