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A beautiful poem... touching expression! Loved it

Let me reach into your soul! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

A poem about depth, heavy with its own weight of depth. Much under the surface here, mirroring the imagery of the piece itself. Lovely piece, Nosheen. Bravo!

True everyone has blossoms hidden beneath one's skin...nice of you to point it out

Such a beautiful poem, I was enchanted...................

Fantastic poem, the way you explored your lover it reveals a world of your own...

I am very impressed with the sincerity of this poem. The speaker has such an intimate awareness of the true nature of the one she is addressing. This is the true basis for love and beyond the emotion itself of a relationship. I'm reminded of Yeats's beautiful line about his true love: ONE MAN LOVED THE PILGRIM SOUL IN YOU. This love on the soul-level and you express that dimension of love by a series of beautiful things which reveal his true nature and by extension your true nature.

emotions and urge to dive into an ocean of love... beautiful poem.

Beautiful poem uncovering cover from love.

This is a beautiful love poem. This is what every human wants...to be really SEEN beneath their veils, beneath their skin...for somehow to be able to peer into their souls and truly LOVE how special they are. You've shown your reader there is potential in the human condition. Lovely Nosheen! Pam (Jette)

We get only a lop sided idea when we view someone through external vision! But if we probe deeper into the inside, we will be surprised to know that there is much more to him/her and what we got earlier was just a partial view! A profound truth poetically stated!

Hi Nosheen, It is said, Beauty is not skin deep. The statement is true about, not just beauty, but about character, friendship etc too. But a soulmate alone can understand you fully. Your value, Your Worth.. Beautifully rendered..

Let me dive into the whirlpool of your smiles and tears You are not shallow Let me pick the blossoms beneath your skin. wow, what lovely lines do you compose mam, a marvel of art indeed. A classic touch of pure love, passion and an elegant poetic style. 10++++++++ Regards. Subhas