Saturday, March 24, 2007

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Awake, oh sleeping timid dreams.
Step into the light of hopeful beams.
Rise from the depths of frail nervousness.
Give your yearning a chance in all fairness.
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Theresa Ann Moore
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Ben Gieske 05 May 2007

Nicely put. You have a gentle, caring touch which some of us can use. However, there are others of us who need much more. I recently read this poem by Rebecca Thompson which I truly like. So powerful. Prayer To The World Lift, O mighty sun Bring your light to me. Lift, O cresting waves -- Waken me with thunder on the shore. Lift, Wind, the branches of the majestic oak, Spread the glistening leaves. Bring motion to me. Be fierce, O World, Filling the air with broken roses Letting delicate pieces of red Flutter to hard earth Bringing softness to me. Lift, O World, Me, So that I may come to you Fresh, Cleansed by ferocity.

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Jacob Bradshaw 09 April 2007

Wonderful, and nothing more need be said.

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Theresa Ann Moore

Theresa Ann Moore

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