Deep down the oceans
Far across the sea
High above the mountains
Far across the sky
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Fantastic write...Geetha, with some brilliant lines in them! ! Neither the wind carried it Nor the words whispered it Nor the rivulets carried it......... What a mysterious message! !
Carefully the message was wrapped in rays of sunlight. The beautiful rainbow gave a touch of glow. The fragrance of jasmine touched its core. A beautifully crafted poem with rich and glorious imagery. I loved the poem, every line of it. Sometimes it is better to keep things under wraps.10/10 is the least score I can commit.
Up above Down below Across rhyme Love, dove, love For this is Valentine That spells out love And unlocks love only love as pure as divine........Geetha........very very well composed...........
Geetha, this is a fabulous write.You are maestro of love poem.I won't ever be able to write such a nice poem.
a sweet tweet again in the season of love seasonless!
Deeply felt. Self-expression is vital for us, even to know ourselves. Thank you for your comments which encourage me. Best wishes AM
keep the mind pure, the first ingredient of love, thanks. In return I am submitting my heart.
the mind pure before opening it! .. lovely line...10 keep the mind pure and doubly assure what lies for us in future? open the lock and secure