Wednesday, February 12, 2014

Unlock The Lock! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Deep down the oceans
Far across the sea
High above the mountains
Far across the sky
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 February 2014

the mind pure before opening it! .. lovely line...10 keep the mind pure and doubly assure what lies for us in future? open the lock and secure

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Valsa George 13 February 2014

Fantastic write...Geetha, with some brilliant lines in them! ! Neither the wind carried it Nor the words whispered it Nor the rivulets carried it......... What a mysterious message! !

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 13 February 2014

Purity of mind is the key. Nice poem.

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Rajesh Thankappan 13 February 2014

Carefully the message was wrapped in rays of sunlight. The beautiful rainbow gave a touch of glow. The fragrance of jasmine touched its core. A beautifully crafted poem with rich and glorious imagery. I loved the poem, every line of it. Sometimes it is better to keep things under wraps.10/10 is the least score I can commit.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 13 February 2014

Up above Down below Across rhyme Love, dove, love For this is Valentine That spells out love And unlocks love only love as pure as divine........Geetha........very very well composed...........

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Neela Nath Das 13 February 2014

Geetha, this is a fabulous write.You are maestro of love poem.I won't ever be able to write such a nice poem.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 13 February 2014

a sweet tweet again in the season of love seasonless!

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A. Madhavan 13 February 2014

Deeply felt. Self-expression is vital for us, even to know ourselves. Thank you for your comments which encourage me. Best wishes AM

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Gajanan Mishra 12 February 2014

keep the mind pure, the first ingredient of love, thanks. In return I am submitting my heart.

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Anil Kumar Panda 12 February 2014

this is real sweet in this valentine.loved it.

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Geetha Jayakumar

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