Wednesday, May 9, 2012

Unlock The Door! Comments

Rating: 5.0

my heart grieves...
my ship tossed by the storms...
the anger of those forgotten,
cast aside, thrown away.
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Eric Cockrell
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Juan Olivarez 11 May 2012

Indeed we must unlock the door, maybe in our lifetime.

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Wahab Abdul 10 May 2012

nice poem, emotion evoked

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Everyone is angry and locked themselves to feel great in their own territory. Nice poem Eric and your wolf poem that trembles the thoughts too..Great! !

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Dave Walker 10 May 2012

A great poem, there will always be them who think they are better, and there will always be someone ready to take peoples rights away. A great write.

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