Saturday, September 3, 2016

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dark and cold winds roar
out beyond the prison door
hidden mystery to explore
no matter how we spin it
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Barry Middleton
sky
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Annette Aitken 10 September 2016

A beautiful poem...plenty of food for thought..and a lovely photo to accompany it. Annette

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Barry Middleton 13 September 2016

Thanks Annette, I have been out of town and off the grid for a week. Forgive me if I do not respond to all your comments till I get caught up. I do appreciate your reading my work.my work.

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Nosheen Irfan 06 September 2016

You have tried to find the mystery of universe in these beautifully poetic lines. We certainly need to look beyond the sky to know the meanings.

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Barry Middleton 13 September 2016

Thanks Nosheen.

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Dimitrios Galanis 04 September 2016

''wisdom rests within its grace'' great verse//I do not catch the whole meaning of the poem, Barry.

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Barry Middleton 15 September 2016

Thanks Dimitrios. I too am confused.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 03 September 2016

Wow an inspiring poem with an awesome refrain ' the sky's not the limit' yeah and I enjoyed the fabulous rhyming muse here. U write creatively poet. Nice to read from u again, pls do comment my latest poem on eclipse too.

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Barry Middleton 15 September 2016

Thank you for the positive comments.

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