Friday, April 12, 2019

Unlike Others Comments

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Unlike spring, which comes and goes,
unlike moon that appears and then vanishes
Unlike day and night that keep rotating
I love you all the time
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M. Asim Nehal
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Mamta S 13 July 2020

Wow 2 in 1 nicely thought.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 April 2019

Being two in one is definitely amazing. Unlike spring, which comes and goes, this dream and that reality to come and go but the perceptional beauty remains in mind. This is an excellent poem shared.10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 April 2019

Unlike rain that wet us together Unlike flowers and fragrances Unlike hunger and thirst We are two in one....I liked this stanza most! Well penned..................10

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