Wednesday, February 1, 2017

Unlike My Wildest Dream Comments

Rating: 4.5

Once
Who I am today, I wished to be.
To lift myself, of this I would day dream.
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Patricia Clarke
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Khairul Ahsan 30 April 2020

A poignant poem with soulful thoughts. 'I have become, yet I cannot be' - The poem ends so pathetically! It seems you have accomplished your goal, i.e what you had wanted to have or to be, yet you are left with a void to be filled. An excellent poem. The sorrows expressed in the poem touched me.

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