I saw Heaven in the clouds
A place of freedom and light
In a land of diverse crowds
Living and respecting each person's rights
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Well, I'm not going to tell you what I think about America, but I must say that you wrote a great work: sincere and well rhymed.
Lorraine, Yes we seek peace at all cost. It is too bad that so many don't like Americans because of our love of freedom and love of man and our untiring attempts to help mankind.. I too look to the clouds for one day my Lord will come.. Blessings.
Visionery is imaginary for poets, that you handled well
All the world has a gratitude debt with America, also those countries that believe the opposite. This poem expresses kindness to everybody. I want to return trust.
This poem is really cool! It's so great that someone still remembers 9/11!
almost visionary style, good meter, nice poem with a relevant subject, Well done.
'If each of us could reach That special inner peace Then Liberty will teach And hatred will now cease' - nicely penned wisdom.