Tuesday, September 2, 2008

Unless We Forget 9/11/2001 Comments

Rating: 4.9

I saw Heaven in the clouds
A place of freedom and light
In a land of diverse crowds
Living and respecting each person's rights
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Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black
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Khairul Ahsan 01 November 2017

'If each of us could reach That special inner peace Then Liberty will teach And hatred will now cease' - nicely penned wisdom.

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Costa Anakiev 30 March 2009

Well, I'm not going to tell you what I think about America, but I must say that you wrote a great work: sincere and well rhymed.

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Kathryn Tyler King 10 September 2008

Lorraine, Yes we seek peace at all cost. It is too bad that so many don't like Americans because of our love of freedom and love of man and our untiring attempts to help mankind.. I too look to the clouds for one day my Lord will come.. Blessings.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 06 September 2008

Visionery is imaginary for poets, that you handled well

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Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello 05 September 2008

All the world has a gratitude debt with America, also those countries that believe the opposite. This poem expresses kindness to everybody. I want to return trust.

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Tom Balch 05 September 2008

We must never forget, great words to the lost regards Tom

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Hannah Martin 04 September 2008

This poem is really cool! It's so great that someone still remembers 9/11!

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Shaun William Hayes 02 September 2008

almost visionary style, good meter, nice poem with a relevant subject, Well done.

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