Abandoned summer,
Hotter than the desert sand,
My bare body,
Trembles in your arms,
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Passionate love unleashed in poetic words, your words make this world and its creation look so nice
wonderful writting with a very passionated feelings
passion and eros well mixed...and well served on a good poetic platter...thanks...10
Romantic and passionate, beautifully written Reshma 10 Lynda xx
This is hot stuff Reshma! Powerful and passionate words. Excellent writing. Top marks Karin Anderson
This is a powerful write Reshma - very deep and almost disturbing. Well done Mark
ur poetic ideas are truly UNLEASHED! marvelous write
very nice and deep poems. what comes from the heart touches the heart. pl read my new poems on pg1 happy 12th birthday samia my first born.
if this is your love unleashed, then let me be the fist on line, to test that flaming desire when you put my heart on fire. gr8t gr8t double ten
excellent write...a very passionate love pictured very well
Energetically orgasmic!