I asked for a sister and soon after -
You breathed in my mothers womb
The garden of our family seemed to bloom
A Joyous life ahead was what we all assumed.
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The way you utilise your power of the HUMANE aspect in yourself is just un-matched. How you do visualise and then able to pen those painful moments? This is indeed a skill so rare. I am sure with age you will grow up to make a difference in this world.... and that is waht is important.
THANK GOD, NOT A PERSONAL EVENT, BUT UNFORTUNATELY, SUCH AN EVENT FOR TOO MANY...YOU'VE CAOTURED THE DEEP[ROOTED SORROW SO WELL....SADLY STELLAR WRITE...10 ''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK
A wonderful poem, Preeti. For someone who didn't experience this, you've done a marvelous job with such a sad subject. The love literally flows through it. Warmest regards and respect, CJ
amazing poem.... i dont know how many of ur poems are best... u write wonderful... keep it up..... Niks