Heard a knock behind my head!
Little Mickey Mouse entered my house of brain.
Waited for no permission
Pushing me aside, It just entered as if its own house.
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Why did you keep us all hungry.. LOVELY POEM. NICE CHASE////10 HAD WE BEEN MOUSE, THIS WOULD HAVE BEEN NICE HOUSE NICE TO DRINK AND FEEL MERRY
What a puzzle! You really amused me. I just keep imaging the scenario. Good job!
You have made me smile with this write. Full of strong messages and you know about cricket. Always words from deep inside your heart and mind. Thankyou.
These tiny rodents can drive us crazy and steal even our sleep. Yes, they are so tricky and clever enough to evade the mouse trap! But never let anything eat your brain! Poetry and great ideas are stored up there! Beware of the gnawing bites! !
Mind itself a mystery, allows subtle things in infinite numbers to enter and sting like little Mickey Mouse......Geetha .....but he is not to be allowed to rule over the brain in its groove............nicely composed.......
There are many Mickey puzzles in life that irritate us. Poem presents this nicely. Thank you.
A poem of humor and reality. The little creatures can be very menacing, but they too have a right to live. Enjoyed very much, all the readers' comments, particularly those of Valsa George and Ed Nigma.