Unknown Girl Comments

Bri, I've checked my postings page and can see that I've left replies of some sort, although they don't appear to be showing below - a common issue with PH. Don't know if they make a lot of sense because I wrote the second when I thought the first had caught fire and blown away. Again, my thanks. Martin Turner would be a very good name to add to that list of poets worth reading.10 of his are listed I think. One of the finest writers ever to post on here, and there have been many good ones.

2 - Crap! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! i just managed to lose my second set of comments on this. if you send a message to me re part one of my commenting, i'll make myself try to reconstruct what i lost. i liked stanza 9 especially. do you know Revolution 9 song? i don't know the rest of the lyrics and had to Google " number 9 song" to even get the song & artists' name. ha! bri ;) p.s. i'll now check out one of the poets you've suggested in your PH 'bio'.

! - interesting Poet's Notes. i looked up " frieze" and can't fit it into poem. i don't suppose you meant freeze? i've never paid much attention [ YEARS AGO] to rock song lyrics and usually didn't know the words. after 2 stanzas i'm beginning to feel that way a bit now. i mean i don't compute. i DO KNOW (most of) the words. [& i do appreciate rock music; not too harsh though].